I'm a year 8 student, I made this blog for ICT. We had a project, about blogs. I made my blog like this. Our purpose is that people learn of my blog and see what you can do with a blog. I hope you like my blog and you get the purpose
Thank you very much, Maaike
Maaike, there is some good writing here, but try to look at some of the following ideas to improve it:
ReplyDelete1. Make sure to use full stops at the end of sentences.
2. You don't need to put each sentence on a new line, just combine them into a paragraph.
3. What are "funny finks"...do you mean "funny things"?
4. Can you tell me why you think I asked you to maintain a blog? What do you think you can learn from doing this?
Let me know if you need any help.